Wednesday, October 29, 2008

... and she asked if I would ever miss her?


When I look at my cellphone,
and see your name and number in my list,
I miss you.
I call and hang up right away...

When I drive to work,
and see an ugly yellow car,
I miss you.
I smile and drive by.

When I have my lunch,
and its pizza with lots of cheese,
I miss you.
I pause for 2 minutes, and continue eating.

When I'm sitting on a swing,
and the other swing is empty,
I miss you.
I look at the sky and sigh.

When I watch TV and try to grab popcorn from the bowl,
and I see that there is no bowl,
I miss you.
I close my eyes for few seconds, open it, and continue with my show again.

When I'm about to fall on my bed,
and I see my phone, but you still didn't call.
I miss you.
I weep a bit at the end, but I do sleep peacefully...

... and she asked if I would ever miss her?

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

it touched my heart...but i don't know what else i can or should write...

Anonymous said...

awwww wow.As I was reading this I kept thinking I hope she knows how much you miss her.

Anonymous said...

I think she does know :)

(that is if it is for her?)

Anonymous said...

I lyk d pic n wot u wrote ofcuz :)
nyc work Sam...aftr a long tym...
I lykd d way u pickd each different types of moments in lyf...u knw lyk d driving by casually n d swing one was cute hehe....

Dabo said...

she misses you... they always do.. but somehow cannot say it..

Anonymous said...

Yes I miss you!

Even when we talk for hours and end up saying goodbye...I miss you every second after that...
Even when we don't talk to eachother for a minute...I miss you every moment...
Not a day goes by that I never think of you!! Even in the midst of my busy schedule....I just simply wish you were here....I Miss You! :(

"Word Life" said...

I miss yew too.. :)

Lucky said...

hey...dats an amazing piece of work...
i just kept wondering if he'd miss me as much....

ShadowedMindss said...

Dude, who is this girl? man! you are in love. What an amazing verse.

"Word Life" said...

no dear,
m not in love or anything..
and remember, u are the one who got me a blogger, and inspired me with ur work -- forgot or what?
thanks for the compliment :)

Adaa said...

This one Broke my heart...