Wednesday, October 29, 2008

... and she asked if I would ever miss her?


When I look at my cellphone,
and see your name and number in my list,
I miss you.
I call and hang up right away...

When I drive to work,
and see an ugly yellow car,
I miss you.
I smile and drive by.

When I have my lunch,
and its pizza with lots of cheese,
I miss you.
I pause for 2 minutes, and continue eating.

When I'm sitting on a swing,
and the other swing is empty,
I miss you.
I look at the sky and sigh.

When I watch TV and try to grab popcorn from the bowl,
and I see that there is no bowl,
I miss you.
I close my eyes for few seconds, open it, and continue with my show again.

When I'm about to fall on my bed,
and I see my phone, but you still didn't call.
I miss you.
I weep a bit at the end, but I do sleep peacefully...

... and she asked if I would ever miss her?

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

it touched my heart...but i don't know what else i can or should write...

Anonymous said...

awwww wow.As I was reading this I kept thinking I hope she knows how much you miss her.

Anonymous said...

I think she does know :)

(that is if it is for her?)

Anonymous said...

I lyk d pic n wot u wrote ofcuz :)
nyc work Sam...aftr a long tym...
I lykd d way u pickd each different types of moments in lyf...u knw lyk d driving by casually n d swing one was cute hehe....

Dabo said...

she misses you... they always do.. but somehow cannot say it..

Anonymous said...

Yes I miss you!

Even when we talk for hours and end up saying goodbye...I miss you every second after that...
Even when we don't talk to eachother for a minute...I miss you every moment...
Not a day goes by that I never think of you!! Even in the midst of my busy schedule....I just simply wish you were here....I Miss You! :(

"Word Life" said...

I miss yew too.. :)

Lucky said...

hey...dats an amazing piece of work...
i just kept wondering if he'd miss me as much....

Vrushali Deshpande said...

Dude, who is this girl? man! you are in love. What an amazing verse.

"Word Life" said...

no dear,
m not in love or anything..
and remember, u are the one who got me a blogger, and inspired me with ur work -- forgot or what?
thanks for the compliment :)

Adaa said...

This one Broke my heart...