He used to work really hard.
She used to miss him a lot.
Every evening, they used to take out time from their busy day,
and meet behind the farm.
Same story for 16 years.
This way, they would spend sometime together.
It was a plain simple decent innocent friendship.
They had no other friends.
He would lie down on the Earth, and face the sky,
While, she would always lie on his right shoulder, facing towards him.
All they did was hold hands, talk, tease, taunt, and smile.
One day, they met at the same place.
Today, the guy had planned to propose her.
He was going to tell her how much he loves her, and all of a sudden,
it started raining as much as if the sea raised high in air,
and fell on that small piece of land.
(maybe God was testing him?)
This didn't shook the guy at all.
He waited 16 years of his life for this day.
He did what he felt that he was born to do.
He gathered this 16 years of courage, and told her that he loves her.
The girl was shocked. (maybe she didn't expect this?)
She asked him, "how much u love me?"
he said, "more than my right hand?"
The girl smiled, but didn't say a word.
They left, and met the everyday.
Same place, same time.
The guy always told her that he loves her a lot.
But she always smiled whenever the guy told her how much he loves her.
The guy just cannot say anything. He always remained silent.
This story still continues.
What is the girls answer?
Why is the guy silent? and,
is 16 years of attraction called love?
(*Sorry friends, m not good at endings. Maybe thats why my stories have no endings)
7 comments:
I guess the story is good but it can have an beautiful end...i mean y not....It can really end wid a wonderful note the way it begin...coz wat is shown in the story here is highly unpredictable...
..which is true..coz it is unpredictable...
make an ending and make it good!
I know I still have to write part 2.. but give me a lil more time.. I have holiday next week so first thing I'll do is write part 2!
best of luck.. take care...
PS: waiting for the ending!
..hasn't the girl already given the guy an answer..?? cuz if she is still with him...dsnt that say anything??
And wot is the guy silent about?? or is it bcus he's still waitin for the girl's 'confirmed' answer??
no need to be sorry yaar..
it was good...
an abstract writing though..
but i liked it...
well d difference between love and attraction is difficult to tell...
keep writing..
hmmm...
its good...
but increases my curiosity levels...
y did the gal jst smile
y didnt she say yes or no??
was she too shy??
yess dis is love. even after he proposing her she smiles. this is love. n it shud have a good end not like how most of the love stories have a bad end. the BOND but not time is important in any relationship.
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