Monday, May 18, 2009

The Woman in Red


I still remember that day,
it has been a long way.
That pretty Woman in Red.
Had Stole my heart away.

Her hair was black and straight.
With few touching her right face.
Her lips were tender red,
I was waiting for her to embrace.

It was meant to be a date.
I told her that she was looking great.
She blushed with those mascara-filled eyes.
with a big smile, for which I didn't have to wait.

All I did after ordering food was stare.
and poor her, had me to bear.
She raised her elbow to the table top.
with 4 fingers on her chin, she started to stare.

The whole date was filled with fun and joy.
her sight was the best I could see with my eye.
her laugh was like that of a mischievous toddler.
but it was time to drop her home and wish goodbye.

So I drove her home, real slow.
and when we reached, we were both so low.
she said thanks, and walked towards the door.
but stopped at the porch, turned back, and smiled.
AND I KNEW OUR PRESENT AND FUTURE!!!

8 comments:

Priti the blogger said...

aweesome poem .. very well written .. along iwth those rhymign words.. it really stands out ..... the girl in the picture is really cute btw.. just that her hair is curly ;)

"Word Life" said...

cudnt find a pic with woman in red having straight hair...

ankita said...

Should I send u mine!!! ;)

Dead Angel said...

You wrote this??????????????????????
and this girl is some model na

"Word Life" said...

I wrote it...
and yes, shez some model :)
she aint the actual girl in red..
the real one was way much prettier !!

Anonymous said...

"the real one" ???

"Word Life" said...

the real one means -- the one which was actually in my mind while I wrote this :)

Adaa said...

Is it awl jus in d mind sammy ...is der no Scarlet O'Hara tell tell :P