This is just a pure imagination.
I don't know if this ever happened with anyone or not?
A guy is neatly dressed, and drives to the girls place.
The gir's parents opens the door,
and the guy is standing there, he walks in
looks up, and is shocked to see the girl standing there in white dress.
The girl is looking so beautiful, and is more than what he wished for.
They both walk towards his car, and he silently asks the girl,
"Are you dressed to kill me, or to make me alive?"
The girl smiles in a very shy way.
The guy opens his car door, and helps the girl to sit inside.
He goes round the car, and he sits on the driver's seat.
He starts the car, and they drive to the best restaurant in town.
While driving, the girl is shy, and can't say a word to him.
The guy, he can't lay his eyes off the girl.
They both reach the Restaurant,
and the guy gives his car for valet parking.
He holds her hand, as they both walk towards the door.
The naughty guy is still staring at the girl. The girl is still shy.
They walk in, and the guy guides the girl to the table.
Pulls the chair, and helps her to sit.
They both are saying nothing at all.
No conversation between them. Just staring eyes at the girl
The guy calls the waiter, and asks to get red wine for him.
The girl also agrees with red wine.
Suddenly, they hear a humm.
The singer at the restaurant starts singing a romantic song.
That very song which was playing on the jukebox
when the guy and the girl first met eachother at best pizza place in town.
The guy looks at the girl, and smiles, nodds his head, and asks,
"Sweetheart, do you remember this song?"
The second he asks this question, the girl starts crying.
She cries and cries and cries, but the guy cant help it.
He can't see tears in her eyes, he gets up, turns back and he also strats crying.
The Girl asks the Lord, in a cryful tone,
"Lord, why did you take away my eyes?
I just don't want to feel this beautiful moment,
I wish to see all this happening."
The guy gathers courage, wipes his tears,
walks to her, wipes her tears, and asks,
"will you marry me?"
The whole restaurant is by this time looking at the couple.
Around 100 of eyes staring at the girl who is crying.
Even the girl's parents are there at the restaurant; to support the guy,
The girl is still crying,
the guy asks again,
"Will you marry me?"
16 comments:
simply amazing but y blind yar? woh normal hota toh ek dum natural lagta....
made me imagine al dat.
hey its nice......
i didnt find ne flaws except dat hw cm da girls parent cm der didnt find ne link....understood de r der to support da guy bt still........
nd oye atleast make da girl tel a 'YES' to da guy.........
otherwise its awesome....
honestly my curiousity is increasing day by day to knw ur abt ur inspiration.....
its ok wont force u to speak up bt whosoever she is, she will be lucky to hv u.......
a lovely ballad confirming the notion that Love is Blind ,yet it somewhere fills with melancholy when we find the girl is Blind but that's the way true love stories are made :)
cheers !
The post really made me think. You have portrayed the girl as blind. But have also portrayed a deaf? She doesn't reply when the guy says "Have you dressed to kill me"..
She doesn't reply when the boy asks about marriage..
Dinesh,
the girl is shy,
so she does not reply when the guy asks if she dressed to kill him,
and the end part,
let it be this way only..
I don't want anyone to know what happened..
Thanks for ur comment !!!
greattttttttt!!!!! i dont have any words to say,, bro, ur a gr8 writer.. i loved the whole way u presented it... marvellous..
coooll story!!!
keep writing!!
wow...sammy I came to ur bolg after a long time & I am glad that I did to read this....I just dont have words to say about this one.....but I think I have to for this piece of art from you.....It is just amazing & really true love as we say.....is blind.....The way you have built up the whole thing is really impressive & touchy...i could actually imagine all that from the 3rd line of The Perfect Date
I dont have anything to ask you to change as it is your own imagination & believe me it is beautiful the way it is......waiting for u to be here...to take your autograph.....& I will surely take one when you come here....keep writing take care.
the best date i ever read!
an amazing piece of imagination. something sweet n simple yet enchanting. u had me picturize the whole thing and thats the magic of poetry. there r loopholes to yr poem but like all writers its in yr imaginatn thats y it sits beautifully in the lines. i seriously cannot question why they r there. keep writting sammy. thats ur essence dear.
nice story...
actually i read ur whole blog and...
could find something..
pretty good dude..
keep writing..
i jus love ur blog..
Wow..Nice story
Wowwww...simply amazing brother..
u r toooo too gud at writing i must say....
really touched my heart...
great going bro..keep writing
cheers..gudluck
U r obsessed wid Blindness... Normal log bhi saccha pyaar karte hai Sammy!! Thank God gave me sight sound hands feet and what not and Thanks a million he gave me a heart to love!
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